Ririn Divarianti (Hoax)

Outline.
 Topic : Hoax
Title : Hoax! Do you believe hoax?
Thesis statement : Hoax news is widely circulated, especially on social media. hoax influence society.
Body : 1. wasting time
2. detrimental to mental health
 3. triggering divisions

Introduction: according to silverman (2015) hoax are information that is intentionally made to lie but is believed to be the truth.Hoax news is widely circulated, especially on social media. hoax influence society.

Body 1 : hoax can waste time and money.
reading hoax news can cause harm to individuals. there are types of hoax that are made to make money such as making National CPNS registration.

Body 2 : psychology said, hoax news is made to fool many people. because fake news can scare people and take advantage. hoax have adverse effects such as can interfere with one's emotions and moods.

Body 3 : news is often used as material to spread hoax. it aims to make public comments. for example news about child abduction. many parents were made unanimous by the news.

Conclusion : hoax news spreads have a lot of negative effects on society. Society must be smarter in analyzing a news or information so that it is not easy to believe in hoax that create panic for individuals.

Komentar

  1. http://mardyahwikha.blogspot.com10 Maret 2020 pukul 19.24

    In my opinion, the body paragraphs and thesis statements are less balanced and less connected

    BalasHapus
  2. Danita Firdayana10 Maret 2020 pukul 19.32

    I think your first body is the same point and explanation with our classmates. you should look for other examples or clarity that is more compact than you are making ..

    BalasHapus
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    1. Tengku Reni10 Maret 2020 pukul 19.44

      Hello Ririn, Best my view about your essay, the first introductory paragraph you don't explain, what do you want to explain in the next body paragraph

      Hapus
  3. Putri Wahyuni10 Maret 2020 pukul 19.45

    good ririn, but in intro please your explain about your topic first

    BalasHapus
  4. Nabila Khairunnisa10 Maret 2020 pukul 19.53

    Hallo ririn. Good idea to develope your essay writing

    BalasHapus
  5. http://pebriyunibrhutabarat.com10 Maret 2020 pukul 20.02

    Hi ririn.
    Your essay is good..
    But i think your TS not connection with your body in outline.. I don't get your point what you want to explain in your thesis statement,, could you explain what you mean??

    BalasHapus
  6. Desi Maranata10 Maret 2020 pukul 20.14

    Hi ririn in my opinion your essay is not connected each other . Your thesis statement should connected with your body paragraph

    BalasHapus
  7. Camelia Manalu10 Maret 2020 pukul 20.21

    Hi ririn in my view your thesis statement is not connect with the body, and don't forget to use transition signal , it will be add value in your essay🌸

    BalasHapus

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